My heart pumped, my mouth was dry and with every step my school bag pounded against my back. I knew Mr Blue would show no mercy, late three times in a row, I was in big trouble!
I could hear the school bell ringing from where i was, so i went from jogging to sprinting as fast as i could. The school gate seemed to get further and further away, I was thinking of a excuse for being late to school.
My legs were pumping, my eyes were watering, theres no excuse for being late in in our class. Sweat driping off my forhead, kids yelling and cheering,the bell rings I start crying just thinking about the consequences I will have to face.
A ringing trembled in the distance, people scatter into the classes then the teachers drop out of the classes and stare at me, i drop everthing, and run for my life.
Congratulations Liam O, Liam M and Harrison. You each wrote a much more interesting and image provoking piece of writing than the starter piece. Check out the sentence for next week...
The rain pelleted down like a row of machine gun fire, puddles are forming faster than I can type this comment. My head hurts just talking about it. Liam O
the rain was trebling down on my face as i cried as it smashed on my face puddles are surrounding me they are getting deeper and deeper. faster then i can think ? i was coverd in water and i think i can see the sun peeking in the clouds from a distance.
I ran faster and faster I could feel the rain seeping through my jacket. The rain was so cold it was almost hot. I could hear the bell in the distance. It was burning a hole in me. I didn't know what crazy mindblowing punishment Ms Heactor could think of this time.
Every step I take my legs get closer to falling of their hinges. I thought it was raining because I was getting saturated in my own sweat fluids. I knew that every step I took would be a new punishment Ms Batom would think of.
My heart pumped, my mouth was dry and with every step my school bag pounded against my back. I knew Mr Blue would show no mercy, late three times in a row, I was in big trouble!
ReplyDeleteI could hear the school bell ringing from where i was, so i went from jogging to sprinting as fast as i could. The school gate seemed to get further and further away, I was thinking of a excuse for being late to school.
ReplyDeleteMy legs were pumping, my eyes were watering, theres no excuse for being late in in our class. Sweat driping off my forhead, kids yelling and cheering,the bell rings I start crying just thinking about the consequences I will have to face.
ReplyDeleteLiam O
A ringing trembled in the distance, people scatter into the classes then the teachers drop out of the classes and stare at me, i drop everthing, and run for my life.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Liam O, Liam M and Harrison. You each wrote a much more interesting and image provoking piece of writing than the starter piece. Check out the sentence for next week...
ReplyDeleteThe rain pelleted down like a row of machine gun fire, puddles are forming faster than I can type this comment.
ReplyDeleteMy head hurts just talking about it.
Liam O
Wonderful writing Liam O!
ReplyDeletethe rain was trebling down on my face as i cried as it smashed on my face
ReplyDeletepuddles are surrounding me they are getting deeper and deeper. faster then i can think ?
i was coverd in water and i think i can see the sun peeking in the clouds from a distance.
kate bird
I ran faster and faster I could feel the rain seeping through my jacket. The rain was so cold it was almost hot. I could hear the bell in the distance. It was burning a hole in me. I didn't know what crazy mindblowing punishment Ms Heactor could think of this time.
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Every step I take my legs get closer to falling of their hinges. I thought it was raining because I was getting saturated in my own sweat fluids. I knew that every step I took would be a new punishment Ms Batom would think of.
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